*another poem without a name*
okay here's a poem that needs serious work lol
Am I beautiful
Am I funny
Am I pitiful
Am I worthless
In your eyes
Am I pretty
Cute funny
Nice
Are my jeans a little tight
In your eyes
Do you love me
Do you hate me
Do you despise me
Do you miss me
Do you tell anyone about me
Or am I just another page in your story
What am I
In the book of your life
Your first love
Your frist date
Your first kiss
Your first bait
The love of your life
Or am I just another girl
Who meant nothing
The next girlfriend of the month
The next chick who fell for your charm
The next
Stupid, hated
Loser, Jaded
Girl caught in your trap
Hmm.... something doesn't flow right
What do you guys think? help from ANYONE would be nice (yes beccy you too)
4 Comments:
I like what you're trying to say, its good. But somethings up in the 2nd stanza, and Im not sure what, maybe its because I just stumbled out of bed and walked 2 steps to my computer aboput 5 minutes ago. It is really awesome though.
11:04 AM
eh.........
11:05 AM
lol, wow I was tired this morning. "aboput" Wow, my smartness in the morning is awesome.
1:58 PM
hahaha yeah sammi! and beccy i get it!
10:54 PM
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