Confusion

Okay possible lyrics to a song? This sounds way better when I sing it in my head so the parts that don't fit are GOING TO hahaha and I OBVIOUSLY need to change some of it. Keep me posted on how lessons are going for yo' instrument.



I thought I liked someone
Thought with all my heart and soul
No, I knew I liked him
He was
Cute beyond belief
HIs smile made me melt
And when he'd look at me
I was powerful
A rush right up to my throat
He was the one for me

Then you came
You threw off everything

I was so sure
So sure I had me figured out
But my head is spinning
The world keeps on passing me by

I fall down and you pick me up
You're the first one to help me some
But where's my wonder man now?
Not here
Sure he's hot and so cute
His smile is to-boot
But you're here
And your not that bad
In fact I like you better instead

Sure you're not as cute
But you've got ambitions
You want to go somewhere
You've got the positive outlook
That I need

Why did it take me so long
You'd been right there
Staring me in the face

I saw you
Your face
But I never really looked
To find a different place

And I'm not going to hold back
This time
We saw how well that worked
I won't do it again
I have to tell you so....

When I see you I get a
Rush right up to my throat
You are the one for me
Before you came
I didn't know anything

I'm so sure
So sure I have us figured out
Cause you are everything
I want I need
I'd hoped and wished for
Growing up
Imagining
Beautiful scenes in my head
The one face that's missing is yours


I have an idea. Any time you think that a stanza in my poem could work better this way or needs changing here or w/e post it and then we can like work on them together. I want help on my poems so like SAM it won't hurt my feelings or anything. It's the only way they're going to get better right?