*this poem doesn't have a name yet*
Hey I'm going to be posting a lot of poems in the next couple of days, because whenever I'm upset I write and recently my life has been crazy.
This poem is still in the works so any help on it would be lovely and the last two stanzas I don't know where they will fit into hte poem but I'm just gonna put it there in case. Maybe a completely different poem. I dunno what do you guys think?
I feel left out
I feel not loved
I feel like my mom
Has left me for good
She doesn't care
Doesn't care about me
She treats me like shit
And doesn't realize it
I want her back
I miss my mom
How's a girl supposed
To make it through all alone
Thank God for my friends
For without them I'd be dead
She yells at me
I take it in
She cares to much about my kin
To notice me
Where'd you go?
I want you back
The caring, loving, funny
Mom that I had
You were the best
Any kid could ask for
Better than the rest
But now you're gone
9 Comments:
I'm expecting you to relate to this one a little bit sam!! So now you don't have your lame excuses. Lol. jking they weren't lame they were pretty valid but w/e.
Hils you should relate to this too.
Beccy. Lovely Beccy. Are your parents a little biased too? I don't really know.
9:18 AM
Yes, maggie I do relate to this one, I'm not sure if it should be changed yet though. Again, I just woke up, so give me a break.
9:30 AM
fine but if i come home and you have no suggestions i am going to be one very unhappy maggie :|
:)
thanx for being there for me last night sam. you're such an awesome friend!
<3
9:55 AM
No problem maggie, thats what friends are for!! I don't have any yet
9:58 AM
suggestions**
9:58 AM
hey mags! yea i can relate to that poem...except my mom wasn't ever like "The caring, loving, funny Mom that I had" but yanno .... yeah i like that poem a lot. hmm its hard to know wehre those last 2 stanzas are... hum diddy dum
love ya call me soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hil
ps i hope your hard times get better
>:D< hugs n smooches :*
hehe.
11:10 AM
good! I'm glad everyone can relate!!! And I'm also glad we all read each other's comments before commenting lol. Maybe something LIKE THIS could be our first song????!!!!
1:28 PM
s/h.
hil
10:19 PM
me too
12:09 AM
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