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Thursday, September 01, 2005

poems poems poems

in light of my nutso night last night here's two poems i wrote



You tell me to tell you
I say, 'Why would I?
In the past all you've done
Is screamed and yelled 'till I cry'

You say you're 'working on it
my memories are old
try you again
see what happens,' i am told

So I try again
BIG mistake
You don't scream or shout
But you're totally fake

I try to tell you
How I'm feeling inside
But you ignore that this
Isn't the first time I've tried

Cause You know the way I feel
So much better than I do
You tell me your deal
You think you know what I knew

But you have no clue
Though you think you do
Because of all the books you've read
You think you know what's going on in my head

But you don't
You have no clue
How I feel
It might be different than you




here's the next one



Shut up with all you're "I thinks"
And finally listen to your child that sinks

Lower and Lower and Lower

You have to save her soon
Before she sinks

Lower and Lower and Lower

Down into the black Lagoon
She sinks

Lower and Lower and Lower

She can't breathe

Lower, Lower, Lower

She gasps for breath

Lower, Lower, Lower

Do you even love your child?

Lower, Lower, Lower

Don't you realize

Lower, Lower, Lower

You're killing your daughter

Lower, Lower, Lower

Because you wouldn't listen

Lower, Lower, Lower

All those times she tried to speak

Lower, Lower, Lower

You put in your two sense

Lower, Lower, Lower

When all she really needed

Lower, Lower, Lower

Was a mom who cared a mom who loved

Lower, Lower, Lower

But you're too late
She's hit the bottom
This isn't fate
You did this to her

She cried out
And you shut her up
You loved her
But not enough

Try to listen
To forget your books
She's your daughter
She just wants someone to look

Just be there for her
Support her when she's sad
Even if she feels like
You're the one who made it that bad

You know you can't make her feel
But how is that supposed to help her deal

All a kid needs is. . .

love



okay yes, a little dramatic but I was a little depressed :)

3 Comments:

Blogger sam 12 said...

Oooooh, the first one is really good!! Thats really awesome, sad though. Now im going to read the second one. HEY we were online at the same time, i kept watching your comments come up, GO CHECK YOU E-MAIL, i responded to the ones you just sent.

10:03 AM

 
Blogger sam 12 said...

(poem #2) wow. SO true!! its so sad :( I liked this part the best. .

But you're too late
She's hit the bottom
This isn't fate
You did this to her

She cried out
And you shut her up
You loved her
But not enough


wow, really clever wording, its really good!!

10:06 AM

 
Blogger Hilary said...

OMG sam sad the SAME thing i was going to say about poem 2!!!! of the 2, i liekd the second one better, but i liked them best. the first oen is sad.. gosh boys!! i like this stanza best

So I try again
BIG mistake
You don't scream or shout
But you're totally fake

ya so KEEP IT UP!! wee and dont hit the bottom. gosh i lvoe that line!! love you xoxo

2:39 PM

 

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