awww
awww guys you really made me feeel REALLY good!
i could tell all of your comments were honest, and it made me feel so good. i like that paper somewhat...but i dunno. i'm glad you guys liked it and im SUPER thankful that you guys think that I'M a good writer. cause...no one ever really says that i am...but i love doing it...if i could be a writer....i dunno but sitting around attempting to write all day sounds to good to be true.
if you guys get a second, and you TOTALLY don't have too or anything...
but, if you get a second....could you let me know what parts you liked
or what needed changing?
i love you guys soooooo much!
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hey. i am glad you liked the comments! and yes i will re-read to give you constructive criticism, or praise. haha
well its kind of weird how you say "the family he loved so much" but then move on to say "us" because it made me think at first that YOUR dad had died or seomthing? i'm kind of exaggerating but yeah.
i love how you go over the cute little things you did while you were young- it shows you guys were pretty close adn that the memories are still pretty fresh.
but i can't like hand pick parts i liked best. that was super like...i don tknow if inspriing is the write word because i am not sure what it inspires me but it really just makes me think you know? but it hought it was so sad when you talked about how you coudn't even look at the open casket- and i woudln't know if iwoudl be able to etiher. i'm sorry if this didn't help much i'm kind of going crazy i have to do a ton of ap hw but i am not even started. AHHHHHHHH lov eyou!
xo
hil
2:29 PM
awww hils you're the best thank you SO much!
i really really really appreicate the 'outsiders' view of the paper...cause i can only look at it and think how overdramatic and cheezy it is.
omg i just spent 6 hours on my h/w and i'm not even done but i can't do any more until i get to my momma's house and she says she has a buncha cleaning i have to do, too
3:55 PM
wow, how did I completely miss this post?? ok, I'll try to re-read it later, im in class right now, and quite bored. but I don't have enought time to read it again just yet. hmm. im sorry.
11:44 AM
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